tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463170686978757118.post3764071655144164403..comments2023-12-18T06:44:07.102-08:00Comments on Lisa D. Writes: Emotion on the page--when it's cheesy and when it works. And OS teaser #50Lisa Desrochershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15179219851085181641noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463170686978757118.post-91395104067550643132021-11-03T19:47:56.813-07:002021-11-03T19:47:56.813-07:00Wow what wonderful information this was. I really ...Wow what wonderful information this was. I really liked it a lot. 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Just saying.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463170686978757118.post-72263003631237015712011-06-14T15:50:06.638-07:002011-06-14T15:50:06.638-07:00I've thought a lot about this issue. I tend to...I've thought a lot about this issue. I tend to agree with you, that the dialogue and actions should speak for themselves, but sometimes I get the "what's he/she feeling here?" comment from my critique group. My solution is to try to convey the emotion in a more non-telling way, like using one of the 5 senses, telling about a wish or dream the character has that relates to the current situation, or even having them think about a related story or song that the reader would know too.HelenLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00803623812277046433noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463170686978757118.post-56890054246978471052011-06-14T12:38:18.115-07:002011-06-14T12:38:18.115-07:00I get really attached to the characters in the boo...I get really attached to the characters in the books I read and I sometimes find it irritating when authors 'spell it out' for me; when I'm reading I want to be so lost in the story and the characters that I just know how they feel without being explicitly told, otherwise it becomes nothing more than A book to me. Mockingjay by Suzanne Collins is the most recent book to make me really cry and before that If I Stay had me bawling.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463170686978757118.post-29069261605827717762011-06-14T10:11:28.579-07:002011-06-14T10:11:28.579-07:00I think a lot of what makes a reader feel somethin...I think a lot of what makes a reader feel something has to do more with the individual person than anything else. You can't predict what will be significant or trigger an emotional response. You just have to write as honestly as you can. You can certainly make a good guess that the most intense situation will get a response, but that isn't always the case. Sometimes it is the quiet moments that will get to a reader.Daniellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05155602572346073823noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463170686978757118.post-84799198404368249392011-06-14T09:13:05.408-07:002011-06-14T09:13:05.408-07:00Great post!! I've had that same note before. I...Great post!! I've had that same note before. I'm more careful about it now, but it sure is a fine line between telling just enough and telling too much. I cry at almost everything though, so it would be easier to say what DIDN'T make me cry. :DLisa Gail Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03648323153868702165noreply@blogger.com