tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463170686978757118.post8028704571966688004..comments2023-12-18T06:44:07.102-08:00Comments on Lisa D. Writes: In defense of clichés...and Original Sin Teaser #13Lisa Desrochershttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15179219851085181641noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463170686978757118.post-72190556472108199992012-03-04T17:52:06.632-08:002012-03-04T17:52:06.632-08:00I think your use of cliches are really well done! ...I think your use of cliches are really well done! They made the characters and dialogue interesting. They were not overdone, and I think they worked for the story really well! You should not listen to anyone who says otherwise. :) It is your story, and you should be able to use whatever cliches you want.Brihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04522591067871645830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463170686978757118.post-23900899520601143352011-04-26T10:55:43.985-07:002011-04-26T10:55:43.985-07:00Even if you're certain you used them on purpos...Even if you're certain you used them on purpose you still missed the mark of 'funny.'Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463170686978757118.post-62388290558108427302011-04-26T04:45:24.817-07:002011-04-26T04:45:24.817-07:00I think cliches can only be fun in parodies, used ...I think cliches can only be fun in parodies, used in regular works of fiction, cliches point to uninspired and lazy creative choices.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463170686978757118.post-65918050932861295192011-04-25T22:25:33.248-07:002011-04-25T22:25:33.248-07:00You're certain you used the cliches on purpose...You're certain you used the cliches on purpose?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463170686978757118.post-61649950628346839462011-04-21T02:51:12.653-07:002011-04-21T02:51:12.653-07:00I think if well done, cliches can make dialog fun....I think if well done, cliches can make dialog fun.Karen Baldwinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01522178275164058849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463170686978757118.post-53083707296826213842011-04-20T14:56:39.836-07:002011-04-20T14:56:39.836-07:00And that, right there, is one of the reasons I lov...And that, right there, is one of the reasons I loved the book as much as I did. Plus, y'know, demons are awesome.Jenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12670094635770401053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463170686978757118.post-18475139899935238622011-04-20T09:59:01.420-07:002011-04-20T09:59:01.420-07:00I loved Personal Demons, I thought the way you han...I loved Personal Demons, I thought the way you handled the cliches were great. There are ways to use cliches and there are ways to abuse them. You did the former.Nicole Zoltackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07464800543376449290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4463170686978757118.post-13270285110186652332011-04-20T09:28:51.590-07:002011-04-20T09:28:51.590-07:00I loved your use of puns and twists on phrases abo...I loved your use of puns and twists on phrases about hell. Your opening lines was why I purchased the book in Borders! So keep at it!Laura Paulinghttp://www.laurapauling.comnoreply@blogger.com